工厂区域改造

题目

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

图表信息

• 图表类型：地图/规划图
• 对象：新工厂综合体及员工住宅区规划
• 主要布局：中心和东南角设置工业区；住宅区占大部分土地并远离工业区；西北有停车场，东北有游泳池；工厂通过环岛进入。

范文

The diagram presents a factory's layout for its buildings and housing for the staff.

Overall, the proposed setup ensures the factory buildings are strategically spaced so that work can go on unhindered and that the organization's personnel and families are nearby, yet far from the noise and busyness of the factory complex.

As seen, the main industrial areas will be located at the center and the southeast corner of the land, possibly to minimize travel between buildings. The central hub will contain an enclosed area for factory buildings, which may be the key factories, as well as the main office and meeting area. The remaining industrial buildings will be in an isolated patch in the southeast, far from the residential areas. A large parking area will be built to the northwest of the lot, possibly to prevent congestion in the places of work. Access to the factory buildings will be via the roundabout, although the entryway to the central facilities will only be through the east road.

Furthermore, nearly three-fourths of the area will contain residential areas for staff, ensuring workers can easily get home. There will be a large swimming pool in the northeastern portion of the land for recreation.

(201 words)

衔接表达

• Overall：引出概述
• although：引出让步
• Furthermore：而且
• As seen：如图所示

词汇

• proposed：建议的
• strategically：战略性地
• spaced：隔开地
• unhindered：不受妨碍地
• minimize：降低
• enclosed：封闭的
• isolated：遥远的、隔离的
• congestion：拥堵
• roundabout：环岛

可学习句型

so that 引导结果状语从句

Overall, the proposed setup ensures the factory buildings are strategically spaced so that work can go on unhindered.

which 引导非限定性定语从句

The central hub will contain an enclosed area for factory buildings, which may be the key factories, as well as the main office and meeting area.

现在分词短语作状语

Furthermore, nearly three-fourths of the area will contain residential areas for staff, ensuring workers can easily get home.

写作提醒

• 规划图以一般将来时为主：will be located、will contain、will be built。
• 先写总体分区，再写方位与交通路线；用 north/east/southeast 等方位词建立清晰空间关系。