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英国人口去留原因统计

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题目

The charts below show the reasons why some people leave the UK and why some people choose to stay. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

图表信息

原因 离开英国 留在英国
Quality of life 34% 40%
Financial resources 20% 30%
Weather 22% 7%
Employment 15% 13%
Join family and friends 9% 10%

范文

The charts present a variety of reasons to explain what makes some people stay in the UK and what causes others to leave.

There are 34% of the people who leave the UK because of the quality of life. Weather is the second major cause for leaving with 22%, followed by financial resources with 20%. The poor situation of employment makes 15% of people leave, which is just 2% higher than the rate of the group that stays.

As for those who stay, 40% of them appreciate the quality of life, which is quite higher than those who complain about this aspect, while 30% of people think the financial resources in the UK meet their requirement. Interestingly, only 7% of them stay because of weather, which may indicate that weather is not satisfying in the UK.

Overall, the quality of life is the key to whether to stay or leave the UK, weather and financial resources may also affect some people's decisions. Family and friends are the least important factor for both settlement and relocation.

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词汇与句型

  • a variety of:各种各样的;quality of life:生活质量;settlement:定居;relocation:迁移。
  • what 引导宾语从句:what makes some people stay ... and what causes others to leave。
  • which 引导非限定性定语从句:..., which may indicate that ...。