04 / PUBLIC NOTE
老年人使用手机和互联网
题目
Mobile phones and the internet bring a lot of benefits to people nowadays. However, older people use them the least. In what aspects do mobile phones and the internet benefit older people? How can we encourage them to use these technologies?
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
思路
有帮助的地方
- 让老人和家人保持联系。
- 帮助他们交到新朋友。
- 帮助他们解决日常生活中的问题。
- 学会新的技能。
如何鼓励老年人
- 家人应耐心地引导老年人学习,把复杂的步骤简化。
- 政府应通过公益广告的投放,让老年人意识到跟上科技潮流的好处。
范文
Despite the many benefits of using the internet and cellphones, many older people still do not use them as much. This essay will discuss why older people should use them and how they can be motivated to do so.
Staying connected is one major benefit for older people if they could access the internet through their phones or other gadgets. It enables them to easily keep in touch with family members who might live far away. Video calls allow them to see the faces of their grandchildren and be part of their lives. Besides, online social platforms provide a space for them to make new friends with similar interests. They can join groups discussing hobbies like gardening or reading, sharing experiences and stories. This not only combats loneliness but also enriches their mental world, making their later years more fulfilling.
Moreover, internet and mobile phone know-how can help older people with their daily challenges. They can research remedies for common ailments, discover new recipes, and learn how to fix things at home by watching handyman videos online. Young people already do this, so it is a shame that older people cannot access such knowledge.
However, encouraging them to use the internet and cell phones requires significant cooperation from their loved ones and the government. Family members play a crucial role. Instead of being impatient with the elderly's slow learning pace, they should approach the teaching process with great kindness and patience. By breaking down the steps into simple segments and providing consistent support, they can make the learning experience less intimidating for older people. Moreover, the government should run marketing campaigns showing older people the benefits of using internet and mobile technology in the hope these ads encourage them to learn. And if the older people are not convinced, their loved ones might instead be inspired by the ads to finally teach older people with patience and understanding.
To sum up, it would benefit older people to use mobile phones and access the internet. It is a problem that can be solved but much help is needed from loved ones and the government.
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衔接表达
Besides:引出新观点Moreover:引出新观点However:引出相反观点To sum up:总之,对前述内容做概括
词汇
gadget:小工具enable:使能够,使成为可能online social platform:在线社交平台loneliness:孤独,寂寞enrich:使丰富,充实mental world:精神世界remedy:补救办法,治疗方法ailment:(不严重的)疾病,病痛fulfilling:令人满足的,有意义的learning pace:学习节奏consistent support:持续的支持intimidating:令人畏惧的,吓人的marketing campaign:营销活动in the hope:怀着……的希望
可学习句型
not only ... but also ...
This not only combats loneliness but also enriches their mental world, making their later years more fulfilling.
用于连接两个并列的谓语动词。
By + 动名词短语作方式状语
By breaking down the steps into simple segments and providing consistent support, they can make the learning experience less intimidating for older people.
If 引导条件状语从句
And if the older people are not convinced, their loved ones might instead be inspired by the ads to finally teach older people with patience and understanding.