04 / PUBLIC NOTE
谁应负责接送孩子上学
题目
Some people say it is government's responsibility to transport children to school, while others believe parents should transport their children to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
思路
立场:父母应该送孩子去学校。
政府负责接送的理由
- 政府免费送孩子上学可以减少家庭开支。
- 父母可以投入更多精力去工作,更有生产力。
父母负责接送的理由
- 不是每个人都有小孩,政府用单身人士的税付费不合理。
- 父母送小孩上学有利于政府专注于更重要的事情。
范文
Many in society acknowledge that life is becoming more expensive. That is why some sectors believe the government should provide children with transport to school. However, others say it is the parents’ responsibility, not the government’s, to provide school transport. In my view, parents should bear this burden.
Because of rising expenses, families today spend a lot more than before. This is why some people want the government to provide free school transport to help reduce costs, making life better for all families. Another positive reason for this is that the economy may be productive if parents did not have to bring their kids to school. Since not everybody lives nearby, many parents wake up earlier than usual to take their kids to school before heading to work, draining their energy and making them less productive.
However, others say it should be the parents’ responsibility. Not everybody has children, so others believe it is not right that the taxes of singles be used to pay for school transportation. Next, if parents want to ensure their children’s safety, they should be the ones bringing their kids to school. In this way, the government can focus on the more important things like attracting investors and providing national security.
In my opinion, I agree that parents must bear this burden, not the government. Raising a family is a choice spouses make together. They should be ready to shoulder all the costs related to it, including taking their kids to school. Doing so also makes them more responsible, teaching parents to budget their time and expenses to ensure their kids get to school safely and on time. So for me, it is not right for families to pass this responsibility onto the government.
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衔接表达
This is why some people ...:引出一方观点Another positive reason for this is ...:进一步引出理由However, others say ...:引出另一方观点So for me ...:再次表明自己的观点
词汇
bear this burden:承受这一负担rising expenses:上涨的开支reduce costs:减少成本drain energy:消耗精力less productive:生产力更低的the taxes of singles:单身人士的税收budget their time and expenses:计划他们的时间和用度
可学习句型
现在分词作定语
Next, if parents want to ensure their children’s safety, they should be the ones bringing their kids to school.
现在分词作主语
Raising a family is a choice spouses make together.